- Does the title need reconsidering? Is it too brief
- Introduction too short? Am I speaking in the right tense?
- Paragraphing
Notes -
- Change 'organism' terminology - possibly to 'process'. Organism suggests that it is a singular system
- Change chapters to subheadings or paragraphs
- In the conclusion highlight how memes are used within the broader terms of appropriation - how they can be exploited by graphic designers. A potential tool for designers
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